My bright blue kite
It is very fine
It is all mine
It shines very bright.
What a sight
I think it’s a sign
My bright blue kite
It is very fine.
You can not see it at night
Not even a line
But it can shine
With a strong light,
My bright blue kite.
Friday, May 2, 2008
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heyyy mo! hte mood of your poem is very happy, and exciting. it made me want to fly a kite! the speaker is very happy about the kite. the rhymth of the poem flowes very well. GREAT JOB!
Melissa,
Ha I like this poem. I think the attitude of the speaker is happy, they really love their bright blue kite. I think the mood of the poem is cheerful and lighthearted. The rhythm is flowing and the poem rhymes. There isn't really a theme, but it could be that even when you can't see something it is still there. Like the kite at night. I personally enjoyed this poem.
melissa,
wow good poem. the intended audience is deff someone who is in a bad mood. this poem will cheer them up!
the mood of this poem is cheerful and i would also say that cheerful is the attitude of the speaker.
oh and i dont think that the speaker has to be only a girl or boy. it could be either.
i love it!
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