Lemonade quenches my thirst
When I don’t have it I want to burst
Lemonade is fresh and tangy
I drink it even if it’s rainy
In the summer when it’s extremely hot
I like to drink my lemonade on the spot
On the swings or by the pool
Lemonade is refreshing and cool
I like it in a cup with ice
Oh, that lemonade tastes nice
3 comments:
Tessa
I loved your poem! It was awesome. The mood of your poem was happy and joyful. It made me crave lemonade. You can tell that you feel good about lemonade and that you like it a lot. You can tell you worked hard on this poem and I enjoyed reading it :]
Tessa
I really love this poem. The mood is happy and cheerful. You can tell from the speaker's attitude that they really love their lemonade. I think this poem engages the reader by making them crave lemonade. I really enjoyed this poem. Good job!
tessa,
this poem is really good. i love it! the mood of both the poem and the speaker is deff happy, and you can really tell that they LOVE lemonade.
i would say that the speaker is a girl, just because i cant really picture a guy saying that stuff.
love the poem!
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