Sunday, March 23, 2008

by Lauren B.

Every person in real life, and every character in a book, faces daily struggles and obstacles that they have to find a way to overcome. Santiago, the main character from The Old Man and the Sea, by Ernest Hemmingway, faces an immense amount of issues and difficulties during the duration of the story. Each struggle the man overcomes increases the intensity level of the story. Three things the old man had to deal with while at sea was his hand, the physical and mental battle with the marlin, and loneliness.

Santiago, like many other elderly men, was very lonely. Santiago was an aging widower with only one friend; Manolin. Manolin was a young boy who fished on Santiago’s boat in previous years. In Santiago’s empty life, the boy was the one person who kept him company. After 84 days without catching a fish many of the other local fishermen started to look down on Santiago. Manolin’s parents believed that Santiago’s boat was unlucky and didn’t allow him to fishing on that boat any longer. Santiago became very forlorn. On his 85th day at sea, the old man was all by himself. Being out at sea with no one to talk to or help you fish can make you lonely. You can tell the man feels this way when he thinks to himself, “I wish I had the boy” (45). Being lonely can bring down your spirit and make you feel hopeless and doomed for failure, but the old man does not let this happen. It is obvious that it bothers the old man to be completely alone but he is a determined fisherman and wont let his loneliness get in the way of catching a fish. The old man often deals with the obstacle of being lonely talking to himself, the animals, and other inanimate objects around him.

Another struggle that Santiago had to deal with was his hand. A fisherman’s hand is one of his primary tools. Without strong, sturdy and well working hands, it can be difficult to catch a fish. Santiago discovers at sea that his hand is not in the same physical condition that it had been when he was younger. Santiago’s hand cramps up in his determined attempt to catch a marlin. He develops rigor mortise in his hand and realizes that he has no knowledge or supplies with him to make it better. You can tell the old man is realizing the extent of his hand problem when he thinks to himself,” I wish I could show him what sort of man I am. But then he would see the cramped hand (64). Other fisherman would use the excuse of a crippled hand as to why they didn't catch a fish, but Santiago try's to work through the pain as much as he can.

Although Santiago struggled with excruciating pain in his hand and the mental toughness of being alone, I think the main battle of his was with the marlin. Santiago had both a mental and physical battle with catching a fish at sea. You can tell that the issue of catching a marlin is a struggle for the man when he thinks to himself, "You are killing me fish (92). Not only does Santiago want to catch a marlin for the money, fame, and food, but for the boy. Santiago has to prove to Manolin and his parents that he is a good fisherman and that is boat is not unlucky. Santiago has a lot to prove to Manolin, the other fisherman and Manolin’s parents, but even to himself. It’s easy to get down on yourself after failing for so many consecutive times. I think mentally it was hard for Santiago to be having such a hard time getting a fish. Also, Santiago was an old man and fishing against a fierce energetic marlin became exhausting and almost life threatening to him. Fishing can be a dangerous thing to do especially all alone, at an old age, and with no food. The marlin was pushing the old man to his physical limitations giving him a really tough time trying to catch him. The old man became somewhat injured in the process of catching this fish. Santiago’s determination and knowledge at sea helped him through this obstacle.

Hemmingway’s ability to create realistic obstacles for the character Santiago raised the tension level in the book and made it enjoyable to read. Although you are worried about the old man throughout the entire book and how he is going to handle himself, you are reassured every time he overcomes each obstacle. The old man faced the struggle of loneliness, the battle with the marlin, and his hand.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Laurennnnnnnnn!
your story was sooooooo good:) your thesis statment was inthe introduction and it was very clear. you grabed the readers attention by using words like "immense" and "issues". i liked the thrid quote the best. it was the strongest because it fit well with the surrounding text.
i liked your large vocabulary in this essay. it makes it much more interesting after reading other essays about the same obsticals and challenges.
my advice to you is to make your conlcusion a little more lengthy. other than that out did an outstanding job!

Anonymous said...

Lauren your essay was very good. Your thesis, “Three things the old man had to deal with while at sea was his hand, the physical and mental battle with the marlin, and loneliness.”, was good, but I think you could have added a little more detail into. Other than that, your introduction paragraph was very good. The quote, “I wish I had the boy” (45), showed that Santiago got very lonely on his fishing trip without the boy. One thing you did very well was the conclusion. You used a great amount of detail in it. Over all I think you did an amazing job.

Anonymous said...

Yooooooooooo Lauren. Greatttt job on the essay. You thesis was nasty, pulled me like legit right in you know. It engaged me because it so darn interesting. The best quotation was the first one because it was at one of the best parts of the story, and she had the best supporting reasons that made the most sense to go along with it. One thing she did very well on the essay was her opening and closing statements. So nasty. The only thing I advize her is next time use more adjectives and watch your grammar. Dope job though Peace Lauren

Anonymous said...

Lauren,
I really liked how your essay started, it was a great hook, and made me want to read more. I liked that it didn’t have to do with the story, but it related the story to real life. Your thesis statement was also really good too, it was clear and made me interested. I think that your first quote fit with the text the most, and was your strongest one. The one thing I saw for you to fix was sometimes after your quotes, you forgot quotation marks. That’s all though, Great job!

Anonymous said...

laur-
your essay was fantastic! your introduction was very strong as well as your conclusion. I think the second quote was incorporated the best. All of your supporting paragraphs had great diction and i can tell you worked really hard on this. i couldn't pick out a strongest paragraph because they were all perfect. the only thing i would have changed would be to put your supporting paragraphs in the same order that you listed them in your introduction and i think you could have found a better quote for loneliness. but you did a really great job laur!!!!

Anonymous said...

LAURENNNN,
i really liked your essay. you had a strong introduction and i thought your conclusion was good. you ended the essay really well and reminded the reader of everything that was written during the essay. i believe that the first quote was the best because it fit in well with the rest of the paragraph. then, you explained the quote well and why you put it in. overall, great essay.