Thursday, March 20, 2008

By Erika D.

In the novella The Old Man and the Sea, Santiago endured many obstacles. Over the course of the story, he has to fight for the marlin, as well as fight for his life. Santiago is a very poor man who has had no luck for 84 days, and he hopes that on his 85th day he will be rewarded for his times of suffering with an enormous fish. The old man’s wish comes true, but not without a heavy price to pay. Stuck far out in the ocean, the old man now struggles with loneliness, hunger, and a constant battle against sharks.

The old man is very poor, and before he even sets out to find the fish, he struggles. He lives in a small shack, and resorts to pretending that he has a good meal when he knows that he has little to eat. “But they went through this fiction every day. There was no pot of yellow rice and fish and the boy knew this too.” (16) The boy always went along with his pretending, but tried to help him as well. Santiago did not want him to worry, and seemed perfectly fine with his living conditions. This shows his strength, and his ability to make the best of the situation at hand.

Santiago is very forlorn on his little skiff, and has no one there with him to help pass the time. He feels very lonely, and starts to miss the boy. Thoughts of Manolin are what keep the old man going when he feels close to quitting. He focuses on the boy when he needs to focus on the fish, and on what he is doing. He continuously thinks of how much different it would be with Manolin there, “ ‘I wish I had the boy. To help me and to see this.’ ” (48). He knows how much easier it would be if the boy was there, and he also knows that it would be a good experience for him.

When Santiago finally succeeds in catching the marlin, the reader then has little time for belief that his troubles are over. He now has a very large fish strapped to the side of his very small skiff, and has to travel quite a long distance back to shore. The fact that the fish has now bled into the ocean does nothing to help the situation. Therefore, it comes as no surprise to Santiago when sharks begin to attack his marlin. Santiago knows that if a large number of sharks come, he is no match. “The old man’s head was clear and good now and he was full of resolution but he had little hope.” (101) Still, he puts up a good fight. When the sharks are gone, he doesn’t want to look at the marlin, for fear of what is left -or isn’t left- and he continues the ride back in silent dismay. He had to fight so hard to catch this fish, but getting it back was one obstacle that he could not completely overcome.

Santiago was a strong character that had many struggles throughout the story, and had to fight very hard to get what he wanted. Many of the obstacles that stood in his path were inevitable to him, yet we know nothing of it. He always knew that he could be pushed as far as his mind would take him, and he made it through with an experience to remember. Fighting through this was a strength for him that he knew he had, and he proved that he would never give up, and always keep going.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow erika great story. i could tell right away that the thesis of your story was "In the novella The Old Man and the Sea, Santiago endured many obstacles."
the strongest quotation in the story would have to be the one in the “ ‘I wish I had the boy. To help me and to see this.’ ” (48). i liked how you said how the old man really needed the boy and how he told himself that and then you found a quote that specifically showed that.
something that i really liked is how you gave a lot of detail, and how the story was really clear.
one thing that i think you could change is how you used pretty plane words. spice it up a bit.

Anonymous said...

Erika (bud),
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! wow great essay, i loved it!You stated you thesis right away and it was very clear. "In the novella The Old Man and the Sea, Santiago endured many obstacles." i thought you had really good examples and great detail. My favorite quote was . “But they went through this fiction every day. There was no pot of yellow rice and fish and the boy knew this too.” (16). Probably because i used that one too! lol. but the quote really shows how the old man is poor and has no food.He is desperate for a good catch on the 85th day!
I liked evrytihng about you essay, it was well put together, and your examples and points were great. i wont really fix anytihng! great job bud!!!

Anonymous said...

hey erika, i really liked the story. it showed how many obstacles the old man had to overcome. it also showed how hard he worked for them. i liked the introduction and it had a clear and well focused thesis. my favorite quote was "'i wish i had the boy. to help me and to see this.'" it showed how much he really needed the boy and how much he valued manolin. great story ericka.

Anonymous said...

Erika, i thought your essay was great. i could tell you tried really hard. you thesis statement was so clear. "In the novella The Old Man and the Sea, Santiago endured many obstacles." my favorite qote was the one where they are talking about how they do not really eat everyday. it shows how poor they actually were. “But they went through this fiction every day. There was no pot of yellow rice and fish and the boy knew this too.” (16). one thing i would tell you to do next time would be to reread your essay for mistakes and jazz up your word choice a bit. otherwise great job!