Sunday, March 23, 2008

Santiago's Obstacles by Tessa H.

In our world today many people struggle with different obstacles to continue to motivate them selves and continue living. From recently reading the Old Man and the Sea, throughout the whole book, the main character Santiago has to go through many obstacles’ that affect his fishing trip. This includes both mental and physical battles. To me the struggles that stood out most were his lack of supplies, being alone, and his bad luck.

Santiago set sail for the big fishing trip by himself with small items and the skiff. In his mind he was not prepared for those 4 days was going to be on the small boat. He had only brought along one water bottle with him. “For an hour now the old man had been seeing back spots before his eyes… he had felt faint and dizzy and that worried him”(87). The old man had become very weak and dehydrated from his lack of water for 4 days. Along with having a lack of water the old man had brought no food on his journey. The old man had become so hungry, after the first day he finally picked up his gaff, and began to hunt for tuna. He caught some, but they didn’t last long. He was still hungry. Dolphins sounded his boat, and tempted the old man to gaff them as well. Inside of the dolphin the old man found jumping fish to snack on, because he didn’t like the taste of dolphins.

Beside the fact that the old man had no supplies, he was very alone as well. Santiago was very upset with the decision that the boy had made, but had finally faced the facts that he was going to be going on the fishing trip alone. While out on the boat, the old man begins talking to himself. He doesn’t even notice it at first; aloud he said “I wish the boy were here… I wish I had that boy” (50-51). He keeps saying it because he knows it will be harder for him to catch the marlin without a young persons hand by his side. He also began to talk to fish, birds and eventually the marlin because of his loneliness.

As I stated before, Santiago had been out for 84 days trying to catch a Marlin. Everyone thought that he had bad luck or was “cursed”. “…after forty days without a fish the boys parents had told him that the old man was not definitely and finally salao, which is the world form of unlucky”..(1) He even started to believe it him self. Santiago had never caught a good fish, unless it was on the 85th day. That is why he wasn’t a threat to other boats. Many other fisher men had joked around, saying he wont ever catch anything either.

Over all Santiago had over come many obstacles and challenges, whether it was his lack of supplies, his lonesomeness, or his bad luck. Santiago always got through what ever challenge that was thrown at him. By having these obstacles, it made Santiago more determined, and dedicated to catch the marlin. He also proved to himself he can do anything you can put him mind to.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Tessa, I loved your essay. The thesis, “To me the struggles that stood out most were his lack of supplies, being alone, and his bad luck,” was clear and got right to the point. It made me want to continue reading. I think your strongest example was the first one, it was really descriptive, the reader can picture the old man out at sea. The best part of the essay was how the quotes were interesting and made the paragraphs really strong. I also liked the description in the first paragraph, where you said things like, “after the first day he finally picked up his gaff, and began to hunt for tuna.” For next time, I would add more detail into the second and third paragraphs. Nice job, great essay!

Anonymous said...

Tessa!
Great essay girl! I thought your thesis statement was clear and precise. The quotes that you picked for your paragraphs do a nice job relating to the text, you picked them very well. “I wish the boy were here… I wish I had that boy” (50-51). I think that that quote relates to the text the most, and that it was the strongest one. The strongest part of the essay was your supporting details and how you put in a good amount of information. Maybe I could suggest that your ending paragraph could be a little stronger, it was quite short.

Anonymous said...

tessa,
awesome job on the essay i think it was fantastic! your thesis statement was good and clear. “To me the struggles that stood out most were his lack of supplies, being alone, and his bad luck,”. i think your strongest quote was the first one. it was very discriptive and the reader can really imagine being out in the ocean with the old man. I thought you did a great job with adding the quotes in and it fit into the paragraph smoothly. For next time thought i would make the other paragraphs stronger as well so the whole essay is as strong as your first paragraph, but overall you did awesome!!

Anonymous said...

Hi, Tessa,
thank u so much for this essey, it helped me a lot in doin my assignment.............. :)