Footprints fading in the newly wet sand
The sun is now set low in the blue sky
Memories only we can understand
The laughter remembered will never die.
Holding hands and jumping the rolling waves
We smiled as we had read each other’s minds
We knew how to test if we were each brave
Diving under water for ocean finds
Collapsed together softly on our backs
We watched as the clouds transformed above us
Each of us are as equally relaxed
We found the simplest things that we discussed
Now I’m sitting here on the weathered dock
The time now passed is like a ticking clock.
2 comments:
Erika.
BUD FIRST OF ALL, WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT YOUR A GREAT POET.i absolutly loved your poem!!!!!
i think it was about two people, mabye boyfriend and girlfriend had this memory about a day they spent on a beach but now she knows thatits in the past and its only a memory.
the mood was happy but then sad. The speaker was the girlfriend.
well class is over and i have to end this comment so bye bud GREAT JOB
erika,
ok wow this was really good.
i think that the words are about a memory from a girl friend and boy friend.
the speaker is deff a girl.
i think there are a couple moods in this poem. it is happy in the beginning because you see a couple being together and having fun. but then towards the end you get the sense that she is alone.
love it!
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