Friday, May 2, 2008

ODE TO LEMONADE By Tessa H

Lemonade quenches my thirst

When I don’t have it I want to burst

Lemonade is fresh and tangy

I drink it even if it’s rainy

In the summer when it’s extremely hot

I like to drink my lemonade on the spot

On the swings or by the pool

Lemonade is refreshing and cool

I like it in a cup with ice

Oh, that lemonade tastes nice

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Tessa
I loved your poem! It was awesome. The mood of your poem was happy and joyful. It made me crave lemonade. You can tell that you feel good about lemonade and that you like it a lot. You can tell you worked hard on this poem and I enjoyed reading it :]

Anonymous said...

Tessa
I really love this poem. The mood is happy and cheerful. You can tell from the speaker's attitude that they really love their lemonade. I think this poem engages the reader by making them crave lemonade. I really enjoyed this poem. Good job!

Anonymous said...

tessa,
this poem is really good. i love it! the mood of both the poem and the speaker is deff happy, and you can really tell that they LOVE lemonade.
i would say that the speaker is a girl, just because i cant really picture a guy saying that stuff.
love the poem!