Liar, liar,
You set my heart on fire,
Then walked away
And left me to expire.
The heat is creeping through my veins,
The oxygen draining from my brain,
Adrenaline rising, I feel the rush,
As my blood begins to gush.
With my body violently shaking,
I feel my heart start aching,
The fire’s within my soul
And I’ll lose all self-control.
Please douse the fire away,
Before I begin to decay,
I know what I have felt
And I don’t want to melt.
Save me from the flames you’ve made
And all the little games you’ve played,
Just lay me in my grave to rest,
This is all at my request.
I’ll never forgive you
For what you’ve done,
Even though I thought
You were the one.
Liar, liar,
You set my heart on fire,
Then walked away
And left me to expire.
16 comments:
NO STANZAS!!!! OH NO!!!!
your poem was amazing!! i loved it :]
you were able to express your feelings clearly. the rhythm of the poem seems to flow. the mood was kind of depressing. the theme of this poem is love. i really enjoyed reading it GREAT JOB!!!!!!
wow jessica that was pretty cool.
1) i think the words are about how you loved someone very much but then hurt in some way that lit your heart on fire and you can never forgive him.
2) the attitude of the speaker seemed kind of pissed and angry. but didnt seem to show it that much.
3) the poem seemed to cry and scream and wail all at the same time because of all the pain the speaker was in.
the theme i think would be watch out for who give your heart out to.
when i first read this i was like "wow!!" i thought it was very good. and i liked your use of different vocabulary. great job.
wow jessica that was pretty cool.
1) i think the words are about how you loved someone very much but then hurt in some way that lit your heart on fire and you can never forgive him.
2) the attitude of the speaker seemed kind of pissed and angry. but didnt seem to show it that much.
3) the poem seemed to cry and scream and wail all at the same time because of all the pain the speaker was in.
the theme i think would be watch out for who give your heart out to.
when i first read this i was like "wow!!" i thought it was very good. and i liked your use of different vocabulary. great job.
JESSICA!!!
I absolutely loved your poem. It was so amazing :]. I think the speaker was a depressed and mad girl who is speaking to her boyfriend who broke her heart. I believe that the poem seemed to scream or tell off someone. The poem's mood was pretty depressing but I think the character was angry. The theme was probably love. I really like this poem a lot because it had great feeling and emtion and you used a good word choice. AMAZZZZING JOB!!
Hi Jessica,
The speaker is someone was betrayed, probably by someone who she loved. The intrusive factor is that it screams and cries out. The intended audience is people who have had this happen to them.
the theme is betrayal. I liked this poem. It was awesome.
Hi Jessica,
The speaker is someone was betrayed, probably by someone who she loved. The intrusive factor is that it screams and cries out. The intended audience is people who have had this happen to them.
the theme is betrayal. I liked this poem. It was awesome.
I think that the speaker in your poem is somebody who got hurt by someone who they loved. I assume they intended audience for this poem is someone who has had their heart broken too and can relate. The words in your poem are about love. The theme of your poem is be careful who you lend your heart to, because they might break it. I love this poem, and I think it is very true.Good job (:
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